Comments : Finally

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    You need to write this out properly. What you have here is good, firm, positive content that might just inspire other people in your situation and age group. But how it's written right now is just a clutter.

    Don't take this as a bad criticism. Other experienced poets on this site will tell you the same thing. The potential is there. You can make this great. :-)