The fact that it is a reoccurring dream gives this well written sad poem a mystical feel to it . that and the deep emotion are an attractive feature

Ilike it

Deep, passionate, and sorrowful three words that I can describe this poem with. It got my attention from the first stanza till the end. Great job, the words are a sack full of emotions and feelings and the structure completes this "masterpiece".
Great work again, keep it up.

I understand completely how you feel and I've gone through it myself, its's so hard to just clear your head of that person for just 5 minutes so you can fall asleep. I still believe that no matter what a broken heart is the worst pain there is :( Great job 5/5 GG23 p.s. couple spelling mistakes but nothing major to complain about.

I really did like the whole story you told throughout this piece very moving and vivid images. A great write I gave it a 5 keep up the great work Plot121...