THOSE DAY BEFORE

by I knOw hOw sHe FeeLS   Aug 29, 2008


REMEMBERING THOSE DAYS BEFORE,
I CAN NOT LIVE THEN ANY MORE,
I LOOK BACK INTO THE PAST,
AND WONDER WHY TIME WENT SO FAST
I WISH COULD GO BACK TO THEN
AND RELIVE THOSE TIMES AGAIN.
WHY DOES LIFE GO BY SO FAST?
WHY CAN'T MOMENTS STAY AND LAST?
WHY DO MEMORIES FADE AWAY?
AS YOU LIFE GOES BY EACH DAY,
I LOOK INTO THE SETTING SUN
TO SEE ANOTHER DAY IS DONE.
WHERE DID ALL THE TIME GO?
NOW HOW COULD I EVER KNOW
JUST A BLINK OF AN EYE
AND THEN YOUR LIFE WILL PASS YOU BY
WHY DOES LIFE GO BY SO FAST?
WHY CAN'T MOMENTS STAY AND LAST?
WHY DO MEMORIES FADE AWAY?
AS YOUR LIFE GOES BY EACH DAY.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "AND RELIVE THOSE TIME AGAIN.
    WHY DOES LIFE GO BY SO FAST?
    WHY CANT MOMENTS STAY AND LAST?"

    This is pretty good, I liked what you wrote. But first off, don't put your poem in caps, it's so much harder to read, just write it normally. Second, "cant" should be "can't".
    Thirdly, "time" in the first line up there, should be "times". Otherwise, this poem is good, but I think you can go back and work on parts of it. Keep writing, always and forever...

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