Faith Above Doubt..

by rob   Aug 29, 2008


This message from on high it sends
A bantam chance to make amends
From afar a streak of luminescence
With it comes a predominant essence

So very remote, yet still quite nigh
Very well could be a latent goodbye
My heart races at the very thought
"Isn't this everything you have sought?"

A millennia of reflections to express
These dire emotions I must suppress
From this message I must discover
Might suiting again make her my lover

Strive to attend to her every utterance
Each statement make ones of substance
As her indecision becomes very apparent
Aim to remove everything that's inherent

Attend to her each and every thought
Oh the courage that she must've brought
To initiate this dialogue once again
Arduous the call so had to have been

Fleeting like a cool breeze in August
Time will tell if my continued pining is just
As dusk dissolves into longing obscurity
In the darkness now a hint of security

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by rob

    Thanks very much, Grant.. As for my fortunes, only time will tell. I'm glad you understood and liked it. She completes me.. just reaching out to me improved my outlook so much. Whatever happens, and whatever she chooses, it meant the world to me. R

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    My goodness Rob that is a beautiful poem, I hope your fortunes have shifted mate.
    I like that the poem has more structure than your others, your lines end more precisely, in this poem only in one place did you lose the rhyme slightly, but not by much other than that it flowed well,rhymed well and all in all was just lovely to read

    Grant