My goodness Rob that is a beautiful poem, I hope your fortunes have shifted mate.
I like that the poem has more structure than your others, your lines end more precisely, in this poem only in one place did you lose the rhyme slightly, but not by much other than that it flowed well,rhymed well and all in all was just lovely to read

Grant

Thanks very much, Grant.. As for my fortunes, only time will tell. I'm glad you understood and liked it. She completes me.. just reaching out to me improved my outlook so much. Whatever happens, and whatever she chooses, it meant the world to me. R