by Fanny Aug 29, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
You can no longer be my friend |
by Asher
Good flow and rythem of word choice, ((5)) |
by Sarah
It's always hard losing a friend, especially a close friend like that. I love that you put all of your emotions through it 5/5 |
by Ravi
Very nice attempt. The words convey the emotions of separation of a close friend. Nice. |