Winter Beauty

"Seeds awake in rainy spring
Shake off the winter cold
To bathe the world in loveliness
Greens and blues and gold"

What an entrancing way to start of this piece, definetly touches my heart and captures my attention.

"Flowers gleam in every garden
Summer sun and breeze
Giving all to life they can
Before the winter freeze"

Nice rhyming here and throughout, also good flow here..

"Leaves of different colours
Floating to the ground
Happy to greet winter
And kids who twirl around"

Great descriptions, so true what you wrote.

"Snowflakes fall as winter rings
Happily unique
Beautiful in every way
Winter's cold mystique"

Breathtaking stanza, especially that last line. Wow, this has to be one of my favorites by you, this one is so touching and fun to read.

"Why can't we all function
As seasons embrace change
Accepting winter's winds will come
And life will rearrange"

I like how you just don't describe winter, but right here, this is such a thoughtful stanza, that makes us stop and think. I love how you connect everything together, your words are so inspiring.

"For bitter winds may blow on through
Hurt and pain may follow
But beauty's found in everything
Unless we sit and wallow"

Very wise^,perfectly worded, not much more to say.

"The beauty found inside that flake
Of cold and bitter snow
Is everything that we could be
If only we would grow"

Good ending, leaves the reader wanting more, but still satisfied. Take care, 5/5. Keep writing, always and forever....