Dreams

by JustKristina   Aug 29, 2008


When the whispering moon soars above the cold night,
What are your dreams?
Of cars and bare roads Crying?
Or beauty gone repulsive beneath delicate chains
Of old rusty iron confiscating your every thought?
Did you see someone under this fanatic void?
Is it you?
Or is it me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is so well written... deep and dark and the last part is wonderful...

    "Did you see someone under this fanatic void?
    Is it you?
    Or is it me? "
    ^^creates a errie feeling...some kind of mystery...

    wonderful metaphors used..

    beautiful write..
    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very interesting! Something different... liked it!

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