Deadly Scar

by Wishmaster   Aug 29, 2008


Where there is no light
When darkness falls
You'd better hold tight
When the darkness calls

Just when you think you're safe
Just when you're unaware
You're very unsafe
So you'd better beware

So, live in fright you may
Better off you are
So live for today
Or may have a deadly scar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I like the Yoda touch of your wording. It really gives the flow that extra zing to bring it rising above. Cleverly done!