I Lost You

by CryBloodRedTears   Aug 29, 2008


We were so close
Just you and me
I miss you loads
No fantasy

Once we had it
Then it was gone
Now I
Am all alone

You were my life
My everything
Now all I can do
Is write or sing

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  • 16 years ago

    by xKeepxHoldingxOnxAndxNeverxLetxGox

    Not bad. Not bad. This is like a story, beguinning,middle and end. Great job on that. I loved it.

    Dante Stone
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Mmm this wasnt that bad but very good!!! I loved it somehow very much haha. since this is your first poem on here ill give you a 5/5!! Keep up the awesome work my friend =D

    CourtneyxHolland

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