Mirror Mirror

by Tiffany   Aug 29, 2008


Mirror mirror
what do you see
when you
look at me.

My Dear child
I see a girl
whose completly lost
and does not know
where to go.

Mirror mirror
what should I do,
How can I become
the girl who is not lost.

My dear child
belive in your self
and trust the person
who loves you the most.

Mirror mirror
how can I trust
when I have been betrayed,
who would love
a girl like me.

My dear child
not all lie
so many love you
just look to the sky
to the Gemini.

Mirror mirror
you know me best
So I will try
and find my way and
until I reach
the Gemini's sky.

** Very different then what I've ever done.. just came to me as I was looken in the mirror **

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  • 16 years ago

    by Minkus

    I liked the reference to Gemini in relation to the setting, that is, looking in a mirror and seeing your "twin." You might want to look at your phrasing in a few parts, for it's a tad awkward. The most obvious instance is "the girl who is not lost." Good work overall.

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