In that place

by Meme   Aug 29, 2008


Where the warm breeze blows
And the sun shines on the grass
In that place

Where we carved our names
On that old oak tree
In that place

Where we watched the sun
Disappearing with its rays
In that place

Where we hid under the tree
As the rain washed away our pain
In that place

Where we wrote our memories
On the falling leaves of the tree
In that place

Where I buried the meaning of love
Under the soil and beside your grave
In that place

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Lovely! very impressed by the writing style. beautiful poem. great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    fantastic poem, beautiful, emotional and the ending was....woooow

    really touching poem,
    loved the second half of the poem much more but the whole poem was wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    fantastic poem, beautiful, emotional and the ending was....woooow

    really touching poem,
    loved the second half of the poem much more but the whole poem was wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Marvelous poem yet again & I would add a request if u don't mind ... 'hided' should be replaced with "hid" .....in this so sweet poem...

    Anyway it was fantastic all in all....

    You are maturing with every write & you write as per the expectations of the reader as much as I heard about you & your poems was so true..

    And your writes never disappoint the reader but in fact take the reader to a wonderful wonderful world.. Keep it up..

    Anonymous

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