Marvelous poem yet again & I would add a request if u don't mind ... 'hided' should be replaced with "hid" .....in this so sweet poem...

Anyway it was fantastic all in all....

You are maturing with every write & you write as per the expectations of the reader as much as I heard about you & your poems was so true..

And your writes never disappoint the reader but in fact take the reader to a wonderful wonderful world.. Keep it up..

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Wow
fantastic poem, beautiful, emotional and the ending was....woooow

really touching poem,
loved the second half of the poem much more but the whole poem was wonderful

Wow
fantastic poem, beautiful, emotional and the ending was....woooow

really touching poem,
loved the second half of the poem much more but the whole poem was wonderful

Lovely! very impressed by the writing style. beautiful poem. great work!