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by Tiffany Aug 29, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
Mummy wehre is Daddy you said he would come back home. But it was been two months and he still is not home. Mummy why are you crying please do not be upset I did not mean to upset you I'm just hurt and curious. Mummy where are we going and why does every one look oh so sad. Why are they all in black with teared filled eyes Mummy it looks as if some one has died. Mummy it is Daddy but he is oh so still laying there so pale in his uniform. Mummy why did you not tell me I would have tried to understand that Daddy died for our country while trying to save a man. Mummy I will hold your hand as they fire twenty- one shots as they lay Daddy down into the world he loved. Mummy please do not worry fore Daddy is still here he will always be with us and will always be in our hearts as he watches down from above. ** Wrote this after I was thinking about a soldier losing his life in war and having a family back home **
by Baby Rainbow
First line says wehre instead of where xx second stanza says was instead of has xx this is a good poem, toucing language and strong subject xx