I really loved the imagery in this poem and the way you described the scene was excellent. I thought the flow could have been a lot better, but all in all it was a good write..4/5 GG23

I liked it. I saw nothing wrong with it. Everything was great. 5/5

That was a very beautiful description of the winter. You really painted a lovely picture in my mind. I could really imagine the way it looks from your point of view. The vocabulary was wonderful and the metaphors were used very well to describe perfectly the way you see winter. Every line was charming and I believe after reading this everyone will think of winter in a different way. 5/5