Burn this note

by Amir Riveroll   Aug 30, 2008


I always think of you, ever since i can remember
i can't speak to you so i wrote you this one letter
no one can bring out the sun when I'm feeling blue
and no one can make me blush brighter than you
you trully are my secret crush for some time
i cant say these words personally, so i wrote it line by line
every sighting of you squeezes my heart and soul
then slaps me in the face because you are the one i want to hold

i love it when you smile so bright
and when the wind is in your hair, wow what a sight!
one glimpse of you makes me feel like im in heaven
or like an unlucky guy rolling his 2nd lucky seven
its a great feeling knowing i have you to admire
if loving a princess like you were a job, i would never retire.
i could read this a hundred and one times
and when in front of you i keep saying crazy words of all kinds.

to speak to you i must build up all strength and hope
but from here there's no going back, so to gain my own trust... i must burn this note

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Awww...this poem is one of the sweetest...great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, It really makes me laugh because it's so sweet. I really like it....GP

  • 16 years ago

    by mvep

    Wow this peace of poetry is well write beautifully I LOVE IT a lots keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Singmehome

    WOW!! THATZ ALL THAT IZ NEEDED TO B SAID!! I LOVE IT MURF!! THIS IZ REALLY GOOD!! I LOVE IT!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Damn good Murf...I'll vote this for a weekly contest..I think you deserve it...Since the poem is really good..Good job..