New.

by Josh   Aug 30, 2008


Here it is,

the new, improved me.

He'll replace me.

He Stands, reacting better, faster, more intriguing.

He Rants, like a longshoreman with a delayed ship.

He Raves, like a freed animal.

He Speaks, softer, quieter.

He Creeps in, making me look pale & obsolete, annoying.

You push me away, more and more every day.

He'll replace me.

...But where am i supposed to go?

*Note: i don't think this is done yet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ignoris

    Nice work, I really like this. Very interesting idea, can be perceived different ways, but all in all, I think it's one of your best.
    Take care,
    Eleni

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