Comments : The most natural of acts

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    OMG OMG OMG.

    This is without a doubt in my mind, no dubious thoughts or signs anywhere, the best poem of yours I have ever, ever, EVER read.

    It's so freaking aesthetically, metaphorically, liliterally, in every way I can think, pleasing.

    It's great in the beginning, but once I got to 'the subtle beauty in your laughter sets me on fire,' I was blown away. From then on it's spectacularly perfect.

    'the encounter,
    of our lips is no longer the recurring dream I have during
    the loneliest of nights.'
    I love the concept and portrayal of these lines.

    'unveiling the sparkling green diamonds posing as eyes,'
    I love the way this is phrased. What it makes you imagine...brilliant imagery.

    'the subtle beauty in your laughter sets me on fire,
    delighted I find myself in flames of infatuation,'
    this too. It reminds me of really, really good prose. It just flows really well and is an amazing simile.

    I love how in the beginning you are surreal and describe everything in an intangible and pround way, and then we get to see your literal interpretation of those words. Brilliantly and beautifully penned. I'm sorry I waited to long to read it...

    I wish I could give this a ten...