So complex but I understand the concept I bet half the people you show this to they wont understand half of it.
Something about your poems is amazing, once again i think its just how they end up being good without a single ryhme in sight.

Ah! another brilliant poem. my favorite part was

"Wear your heart in pieces around their necks,
While this rigor mortis clots your chest.
And you'll try so hard to make your love tangible so it all falls down."

so very unique and wonderful choice of words. great job, 5/5

p.s. thank you for the lovely comment. :]