Well it seems like you got yourself hurt by a woman,sorry about that your poem was quite sad i must say,but i'm sure things will look better soon . Nice poem

Grant

Thank you grant. I am sure it will, but we all have different seasons from time to time. Right now I have a very dark season on me..

Sad poem... poem of broken heart. Straight from the heart! Liked the structure. Overall it's good... full of sad emotions.
Wish you a bright time... keep writing to make you feel better!

Im speechless this poem was amazing

WOW!! this was deep and powerful here. the words u choice were great. u wrote a lil but it has a lot of meaning in it. we all have our different season. hope urs goes away in time and u'll be filll with light. i can relate to this. i have been there at times but we have the ppl around us to help us get us out. it might take a while but u'll get out. i really love it. Please do keep it up! 10/10

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Ouch that hurts im sry if you really feel that way!