by Roxy Aug 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She's reaching out to something. |
Good to see you're still a good poet Roxx. |
by The Queen
I dont think the periods in each lines were necessary. It could have been better if you used commas instead..It was just my opinion..Although the idea that you were trying to portray was very powerful and i'll give you 5/5 for that..keep writing.. |