by EoB Aug 31, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
World is sick, |
by BlueJay
This piece is phenomenal. I love the flow amd how unique each description and thought was. I really enjoyed the way your voice shines through each and every word. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Well done! Impeccable flow and astounding imagery! |
by Sean
Be proud of it, it's a stunning work :) |
by Raychil
I thought this poem was very peaceful. Just sad, but still a peacfulness fills me. The realization at the end was amazing. I thought it was beautiful. |
by Deana
Your imagery is outstanding! I can see the sunlight through dripping leaves,Like a beautiful picture that stays forever in your mind.You are very talented! |