Masterful and cunning. Excellent choice of verbage. Your work has come a long way and you started with much talent. Great poem.

Your imagery is outstanding! I can see the sunlight through dripping leaves,Like a beautiful picture that stays forever in your mind.You are very talented!

I thought this poem was very peaceful. Just sad, but still a peacfulness fills me. The realization at the end was amazing. I thought it was beautiful.
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Be proud of it, it's a stunning work :)

Well done! Impeccable flow and astounding imagery!
I especially liked this part:

the fantastic bittersweetness of unshared heat.

Truly awesome write!

This piece is phenomenal. I love the flow amd how unique each description and thought was. I really enjoyed the way your voice shines through each and every word.