by HollywoodSmile Sep 1, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Lay with me, sweet boy |
by BlueJay
I honestly love this poem. theres so much to it, I don't know why someone never commented sooner. It's stunning! I like how your voice seems so friendly though until the end a darker tone could have easily been implied. I love the style here and the length. Though I'm not really a fan of the word choice, or wasn't at first, you really made it work in a wonderful way. Excellent piece. |