The bride's a skank,
The groom's a punk.
Look at her wallking!
I swear to you, she's drunk.
^^ LOL..Too much L from walking…: p

Well constructed and flows perfectly. Words used were very funny. You’ve dissed them so badly but in a funny way. LOL.. The last stanza amazed me and yeah you are right, Oh, at everyone wedding, someone always stays home…hahaha..Good One..

I thought this was a fun poem to read as it was something different since I have been absent from this site. A funny topic indeed, but I suppose if you think about it, it's more than likely true to a certain an extent. The poem was very easy to follow and read overall.

Nice work.

Hmm it what an excellent work, very impressive and perfectly expressed the good words, its real funny thougths and i absolutely carried away bout the story. very well written and the flow is really great 5/5

Wow, sarcastic, i liked it :) i hope this didn't have to be true for you. i really liked your rhyming schema, nicely written

This was a great poem, i loved the beginning =]

Good write. The subject was different than most but held my attention well. The sarcasim really sets the mood.