This was a very creative love poem, and the ending suited it well.

"Soft cool lips, delicious breath,
Coerce her to give in,
Or hunger growing deep inside,
Will kill her from within."

Beautiful wording here, really drew me in, your descriptions really keep the poem alive, nice job. :)

"Her only wish is she could touch,
The one she can't resist,
The cold, dark shadow that appears,
At night upon the mist."

Great stanza, I love how you say "At night upon the mist". Nothing else can be said except what breathtaking words, so heartfelt. Overall, a very enjoyable write. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...