The flow of the poem was abit off it was kind of choppy to read the message was good but I think if you put more exsamples or just more information to it it would sparkle Plot121

5/5.... u have really express ur thoughts here and its just simply portrayed and express the simple emotions,, great job

Hey nice poem i liked it a lot simple yet good 5/5 nicely written

I like this poem. it is simple yet i find it meaningful reflecting to everyone...^_^

nice job..!