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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    This piece really tore at my heart...it is full of so much raw emotion.
    Take care my friend.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow! Now this is a powerful piece, Bill.

    "Washed out to sea...like a pirate lost in lore"
    ^^^I like this line!

    Very nice. Hope all is well with you. ;o)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Leaving behind all I love...
    Such is life...
    It was nice...

    ^^^
    Damn this part makes me sad! Take care Bro ... thinking of you
    ~Hugs~
    Sis

  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    Wow. This was very artistic. So much emotion. It's sad and beautiful. I got total chills. Great job. You are great with words.
    ~Kayla

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    It is very rare to find this kind of acceptance in life.Yet, I know you will fight til the end. An excellent write Bill. Hauntingly sad...