A awesome lady

by mvep   Sep 1, 2008


She is a awesome lady I met.Her bright smile
make me shack.

I looked at her picture I felt has a lion hunted a prey.

I tried my best but still I can't hunt her.

Her gold skin and her puff hair make my heart start bounding fast my eyes spinning up and down .

She is a keys of many soul has a pure flowering water.

I can't imagine her to the moon shine at night.

She is more than that me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    Your a good writer, but you should put more flow into it, like something to really really capture our attentions

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Cabrera

    Sounds like love : )

  • 16 years ago

    by cudntfindgudsn

    Nice poem.

    Her gold skin puff hair make my heart start bounding fast my eyes spinning up and down .

    good line. =]

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