Accept what nature offer

by mvep   Sep 1, 2008


It was a long time ago when I came to my sense.

My lore grows in a unique way.

People can't understand what I am thinking.

Its just I can't fit in this best world nature offer.

Storm blew me.

The tornado spins me around up in the air. The hurricane hit houses

builds office humans and nature it self.

War taking place every where in the world unstoppable booming nuclear weapons carry by powerful countries.

The blue sky transform into darkness. Starvation killed millions of humans.

I am still here stand matching to way the best.

Why can these countries be happy with what nature offer?

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  • 16 years ago

    by firexflys

    It was very nice deep poem. if you find a better way space it out to make it better to read. that would help.. if you want help on i i will be glad to show you with your poem.

    i like this one the best. keep it up hope to see something new soon.

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Good concept/subject, but i do think you need to work on grammar and structure..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    The image you have put into such peice is wonderful. your poem wrighting skills, however, need to be improved. this site has hundereds of poem wrighters, read theirs and you should devolpe your own style in time. ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Koolio poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    I think this poem was very deep and it held such beauty in it, but I think you should watch your grammar a bit. There such as "People couldn't understood" use "People couldn't underSTAND" But the poem itself was marvelous.
    <3Raych

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