I like this a lot

You managed to perfectly describe fantasy. A world of the unseen is difficult to see, and even harder to explain. Kudos to you for that. I like the language and how its as if you are right there talking to the person. Dreams, reality, fantasy..... Keep dreaming cuz you definately have the ability to dream wonderful things.

The images of this were well done you set the mood with great detail but as fore having a beginning middle and end. The end was hard to grasp but the wording was done vey well Plot121

Very good!

Imagination, is what the world is made of;
Without it, man would not succeed in his greatest accoplishments.