"The bright morning sun penetrates the crystal clear water above me.
My hair streams along, auburn locks on fire in the brilliant light.
I softly move my arms, propelling myself through the cool water.
Sparkling silver fish tickle my skin as they brush past in schools of hundreds."

Excellent stanza, great imagery that really gave the reader a clear image. Nice work, this is most definetly a very beautiful nature poem. Keep writing, always and forever....