A New World

by charles   Sep 2, 2008


From the world I must hide
What's the real me on the inside
For if they knew I'd look like a fool
And in the end it would bring ridicule
There's the part that I let them see
Still there's a deeper part of me
A part that wonders what to do
Every time that I think of you
It's the part that cries in the night
And longs for things to turn out right
Remembering when you went away
And how I still need you to this very day
So I'm still here all alone
Just sitting and staring at the phone
Hoping it'll ring, you'd be on the other end
Just called to say Hi, and I miss you my friend
I'll go to bed thinking of you
For tomorrow I shall start anew
A new world I shall find
And leave the old one far behind

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  • 15 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    I liked the fast paced flow of this poem. I was able to comprehend it fairly quickly and read thru it quite fast.
    this is a great poem and i totally gave you a 5/5 on it. haha!
    I actually don't have any suggestions for this poem because I liked how well written and thought out it seems.

    All i wonder is how old you are to have dealt with so much pain in ur life.

    hmm...

    take care! awesome job

    A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Niceee... flows nice and shows meaning.. I liked it.. keep it up.. great work.. ^-^

    ~Tiffy~