I can realate to how you feel. its hurts to know that people could hurt people like us. i am sorry you have to deal with the pain of loosing someone you loved so dearly. 5/5

Your writting is simply gripping. I love every word you put on the page; everyone fits perfectly.
This peice was sad. I could feel the desperation...the sadness, and the love left behind.

Truly Amazing,
5/5
-Elaine.

Awww, what a sensitive guy. Okay, well for me the poem was a little choppy in places but was still beautiful and I liked it.