Undefeted

by Jennafluff   Sep 2, 2008


I am strong,
I am undefeated,

You gave me war,
I gave you hell,
You put me here,
I'm putting you off,

My life was fine,
Until you got drunk,
Depressed and angry,
Thats what you were,

You took it out on me,
I was only six years old,
Since then i can't remember,
When i was five, four or three,

You erased my memory,
Then i needed brain surgery,
I felt empty and helpless,
This is what you did to me,

Six years ago at the age of ten,
Thats when you stopped,
Six years later,
Is when it started again,

You put me here,
I was your own mistake,
So put me out of my misery,
Oh wait sorry,
I'm undefeated,
So I'll put you out of yours,
Good-bye

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow doll that was such a powerful piece, it really reflected the traumatism as well as both physical and emotional pain which you have faced growing up but you know if things ever get bad like that again you are always welcome at my house. i love you very very much and am always going 2 be here for you. you have had a really hard time growing up but it has made you stronger. always remember its not our circumstances that make up who we are but our spirits and you have a truly beautiful soul, i love you very much and am so glad 2 have your friendship. mwah, hang in there cos things will get better, you can only move forward!!! You know i only just recently came out of my deep depression and i can tell you that your dad is not himself when he does that stuff. you know depression sometimes gets the better of a person and although you can never ever justify what has happened 2 you, you should just know that you really are not a mistake and there are so many friends who will always be here for you and that love you very much. c ya. mwah

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