I know exactly how u feel

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Awwww.....this is so sad, but you expressed your real feelings in this wonderfully, and this was so touching.

"I am just another girl,
Behind that closed door.
Think what you may...
But I am nothing more."

That's sad you feel that way, but I love how you worded this, great work..

Keep writing, always and forever....

That was freaking brilliantly written. Simple, to the point, and excellent.

I bow down in the shadow of the light that is your masterpiece.

The Angel of Secrets

Very simple yet very strongly written poem. Good flow and good structure... very nice!

This poem is very moving. The way your words rymed seemed to flow really well, unlike mine which seem a little forced at times. I also like where you say, "I try to move on... But no distance I gain." I have gone through many hardships in my life, as I'm certain you have too, and there are always people I encounter who don't understand where I'm coming from or why I still hurt inside from the pain of my past. Their favorite phrases are: "Get over it" or "You just need to move on" or "Forget about it already!" It's not as easy as just "moving on," and I think you show that this is true. I've tried to forget my misgivings, and I've tried to move on with my life as you probably have, but it just doesn't happen that simply. Anyway, excellent poem dear. I can't wait to read the others.
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