Yea, i understand yvonne. and no matter how hard ya try to fix it, its not gonna be fixed. its what happens when time becomes a major factor. so many friends gone, so little time... weird, isnt it.
i liked the poem though. hit home. you're a great writer, keep it up. your poems will always mean something to me. you have really good word choice, too, by the way. and good poem ideas. you're a great poet.