The Last Of Me

by Frozen hearT   Sep 2, 2008


Willing to move heaven & earth
Coming into existence of love
Sailing to a land without sail
With the scars that shall not be seen

Seeking for my rhythm,
Playing with my illusions,
Waiting in the dark
with luminous stains of pains.

Counting the days without sensation
Needles and threads, they patch my scars
Oh! How I crave for love beneath the empyrean light
That only leads to a rapture of loneliness

Being stabbed by a blade
Being throb by words
Engraving my heart with a blade of grass
Is something that can't be imagine where love is so cruel

All I can say,
Cut my heart,
Throw my livers to the dogs
I shall never fall in love again...

Written By: Amir Amzah

(Thank to mauliciouss, for helping me to improve the poem)
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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Seeking for my rhythm,
    Playing with my illusions,
    Waiting in the dark-
    with luminous stains of pains.

    Counting the days without sensation
    Needles and threads, they patch my scars
    Oh! How I crave for love beneath the empyrean light
    That only leads to a rapture of loneliness

    I think the first stanza is not that strong compare to others. Plus i added some punctuation marks in the second stanza and i changed few words in the third the rest are perfect, very powerful but this is somehow a little different from your style, your style normally is a meter free that made your poems all extra ordinary.

    But of course these are just my opinions and it doesnt mean your poem shine any less as this piece is beyond amazing..

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