The ending line causes me to waver between voting a "4" and a "5", however, nothing lower! There is something a bit off in a manner that it causes me to lose the embracing tonal quality and syntax texture underneath and thus my enclosure within the context...yet, the poet delivers a nifty bit of work that semi-joyously pleases while touching an underlying presence (as a simple John Cale/Lou Reed piece sometimes pulls off).