I know many people who cut and i wish i could help at times. Your poem made me sad but nice job, maybe u can read one of mine.

Hey this is a good poem its filled with a lot of emotion and i can relate to it which makes it sadder but all in all good job keep it up

"While others sleep, I lay here with the stinging pain on my wrists.
I've learned that even when I'm happy this pain will always overshadow my life." <--- favorite line.

Not bad. Could have pumped up the impact of it if you left out "All alone, all by myself, only my thoughts and me are here writing these words that only make the tight grip around my heart tighter." I prefer that when I'm reading something, I can stay in the realm that it creates, and telling me that you're writing it makes it all barked up.

Ada, Im sorry that you feel this way and i wish i could make it better, i used to cut and you know it, but dont give in to it, it only makes the pain worse in the long run...be strong my little fairy and hold your head high. te amo,
Evan
Island of Death
Isla del Morte

Wow O.O lovely poem

Hey ada i cut twice and still have scars i know how you feel.... its hard but whatever your reason i hope its gets better.
~kk

It's really disturbing .. And has alot of emotion to it . Again .. I couldn't really get into a flow , but I kind of like the way you write .

The message was kind of hazy, and although it was a cutting poem and I read several I didn't find anything to really make the piece stand out. I think if you gave Mr. Razor more of a character then this piece would be very well done. Plot121

Deserves 5/5 as along as u nd mr razor 2gther

The last line really hit me...I've felt like that, mourning for what i've done. Good write!

Good poem. and im sorry you have a broken heart and you think you have to cut yourself to put the pieces back together. ive done it a couple times before but my boyfriend almost beat me for doing it. i know people who still do it and everytime they tell me or show me i just want to slap some since into them. lol. but i like the poem and again im really sorry for the way you feel. just (if you are) try and stop cutting. trust me. it might heal the pain you hold inside but those cuts will give you a reality check and there going to be the ones thats hurting. keep up the good writings.

5/5.

[[remember im not trying to tell you what to do just trying to help out]]

I can realy relate 2 that you seem alot like me. you should check out some of my work and tell me what you think. 5/5 =]