Cindy this piece truly brought tears. It is so beautiful yet I feel that aching longing in your words. It is these dreams that keeps the spark in our eyes when the flame gets so low and pulls us through another night ... as we anticipate sleep ... for we know it will bring the one we love (loved) so much to our arms if even for just a few moments.

You have done a great job with this form. Just reading the how-to's makes my head spin at the moment ... but I will give it a shot in the near future.

Touching read dear friend!
Love ya
Lu

I can't say Pantoum to be my favorite form of poetry, but nevertheless I love the message conveyed in the poem.Good write.

Cindy WOW, I love it SO much !!!
that was totally creative, I think I've read about this type in another site, but I chickned out to write it, lol !
You had my wish come true =DD
I love the way that lines keep repeating in every stanza, you've just encouraged me to write one !

I think choosing the last line in the last stanza was just so convenient to the poem and the end =))
I don't think I'm the one who has to judge your awesome poetry..so all I can say is that I loved the passion in this poem

May you always stay in love =]
Keep writing xxx

Good job adhering to the guidelines of this form. It was deep and meaningful. It flowed well and the rhythm is good when the poem is read aloud. It reminded me of a fairy tale.....if only there were a prince who could make your poem come true! Nice job!

I like this form very much and I also like
the topic which you wrote on...lovely read!