Comments : What Hurts a "Nigga"

  • 16 years ago

    by PrincesaTJDA

    I found it beautiful.
    Although i did find the chain line a bit long.
    It sort of takes the focus off the words and into the lenght of the line... I would try maybe shortening it a bit, if possible.
    I think i loved it more because it made me think of a young child being called a "nigga" at the beggining then to a strong black man and finaly to all my neighboors here in compton cali.
    keep writing its a gift.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gentle Storm

    Really nice......

  • 16 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    Less words with mo meaning behind them. I take race, and the word, to my heart. I really like this poem. I can feel the vibe, the vibe you had when you wrote this. That's how good you explained what was soaring through the depths of your mind. Fantastic Job.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I kno wat u mean when ppl r racist to me n cl me cracka n shit its lk thats unappropriate well big ups on the poem luv it and keep it up well lots of love katie 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Never let anyone make you feel like
    you are less of of a person only you
    have the right to judge you