You have a good sense of poetic timing, and I loved the awesome vocab sprinkled in just right. This was real good. :)

This was very beautifully written and I absolutely loved the way you worded it and the style you wrote it. I can certainly relate to the emotions you've expressed in this piece and I wish there were more poems like it on this site haha Excellent job with this piece and I hope to read more of your work when I get some extra time :) 5/5 GG23

I loved it. It was unique in the style you choosed to write and the flow was flawless. I was captivated from beginning to end and I was left wanting more. It was short sweet and to the point and had me interested throughout.

"As I sit by my loneslef self every night"
^Do you mean "lonesome"?

Well done.
*5/5*