I partly enjoy this work because I sometimes use this snytax/form myself LOL. It is well executed and fits all conventions of a properly crafted poem in form. The theme/contents is not new or unique, but like a classic Blues tune, the deliverer has made it uniquely their own with nicely placed words and puncuation (and naturally, it seems, understands the importance of the aural properties of a work) something that raises it above a mere "4", this work has the grand aplomb in delivery of making its receiver feel as a friend of the narrator...I would love to hear a spoken word version of this "delightful" poem!

Love it, haven't heard a poem from you in so long but this one shows you haven't lost the talent.
Don't get rid of this one!