This one is well in class and touch as all your previously penned jewels.

Loved thios one too, keep sharing your writes and ideas through your fabulous writes...

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Wow great use of words... love it! Keep up the writting.

I must say that I am impressed by this poem. Idea is amazing, simply absolutely refreshing and creative. I really like your metaphors, I took time to think about each of them separately and they together formed picture in my mind which captivated me. I like complexness of this piece, very cleverly written. I also admire ending because I think that twist there was very effective. Second stanza is somehow to me the most powerful one, it contains core of this poem in my opinion and every word in it fascinated me. I just think that your work here was fantastic, also the fact that every description is followed by another, even more powerful one is truly breathtaking because they all together made a brilliant chain of words and pictures, this poem. I truly enjoyed in this one and read it couple of times. I also like your word choice, though I wouldn't describe this poem as random.