Comments : Maybe later...

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Suicide

    Very emotional poem, i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    So much feeling!! good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    Maybe later,
    Is that all I can say?
    That it may be better one day?
    Thats too hard, not even real,
    It's hard to forget the pain I feel,

    ^^ this is my favourite stanza, i think.

    Maybe I don't want to forget about you,
    I don't want to give up, pull through,
    I'm sorry, I'll forever hold on,
    Even though your still gone...

    ^^ actually this one is. this is a great ending.

    wow makalah this is real good. it has a lot of emotion in it and i like the repitition.

    good write..
    i know i don't have to tell you this, but keep up the amazing work.

    ~me.