At times this work feels a tad ackward in places, however, the poet has the deft ability to make it feel "real"/organic - poet-poem-receiver - the creator of this piece weaves it in such a way with chosen words and the sounds they make (some you only hear inside your cranium grotto) in such a manner that it makes the receiver feel like the poet/writer is talking to a "friend", not a seperated aural/visual voyuer! This poem is far better than a mere "4" and, in the end,
I find myself returning to it...with its delightfully clever finish!