So Cold

by Hologram   Sep 4, 2008


I'm listening to broken stories
Wiping away my tears
Sinking in my insecurities
Falling into my fears.

I've escaped from reality
Hurt deep inside
I'm constantly chocking back tears
From all the pain I hide.

My world is so cold
It's crashed around me
And yet I'm still hoping
That one day I'll be set free.

To Be Continued...
Renee
xx

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    At one point in time I felt like this, 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Love the first stanza:

    I'm listening to broken stories
    Wiping away my tears
    Sinking in my insecurities
    Falling into my fears

    and the line of : I'm constantly chocking back tears

    creative.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    5/5 I Love It Even If Its Not Done

    Thanks Fer The Comment Im All Most Done With A New One About The Heaven And Hell War.

    Message Me Sometime

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nicee work..can relate. =) 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Aweh. >.< I Wuv It ..
    Yur A HeartBreaker Gurl!