Destiny

It's so true that we can look at somebody and by there appearance alone assume how they feel or whats going on in their lives. A lot of people hide behind smiles and we never really know what their all about unless we take the time to find out or care. Excellent job again 5/5 GG23

Yeah honestly not your best either.
Like i said flow was off, i just didn't
like the way the poem sounds when
i read it.
<3Tay
4/5

I liked this piece much better. The structure was really nice, and I liked the idea of what she seems like versus how she really feels inside. I liked the similes used.

I'm not sure if I like all of those words being questions. Maybe if they were just statements followed by a period or a comma it would look better.

My honest critique: 4/5

I really liked the way this was written. It was really unique. Way different from what I'm used to. It's simple, but it hold emotions. I liked this poem a lot.

This isn't a bad poem.. the structure is bad.. but the message is good.. ur just writing what u feel.. but if u want readers to like ur poems more[which doesn't really matter coz it's ur poem] u hav to write it in a way that it's not annoying to read... u shud work on the structure of ur poem..
ok that's about it.. good poem =]