I like it, 5./5

Its original havent thought about doing poems like that.

I liked it. :]

It was different then what you usually read on here which made it quite refreshing to read. I could truly relate with the emotions you expressed and I'm sure many others have felt the same way. You put your own twist on something many overuse you in their poems which made it that much more of a joy to read. It was short and to the point which kept me interested throughout.

Well done.
*5/5*

I liked it peronally. It's kind of like wearing a mask. Good descriptions.

Actually, its not that bad. i found it interesting, i would read it anyday.

I like how it has detail into such a simple write. keep it up!

It's something different which portrays your true feelings, that is what poetry is about...
take care

Again I really enjoyed the structure, you have a real uniqueness to ur poems. And I think you conveyed your feelings very powerfully, by the use of such intense words... 5/5

Ii love it (:
itsz not bad at all.
ii dont usually lyk free verse but ii lyk dis one.
5/5 aqain

Better than the other one I looked at. Interesting again, but your poems would do well with some rhymes. =D

This isn't a bad poem.. the structure is bad.. but the message is good.. ur just writing what u feel.. but if u want readers to like ur poems more[which doesn't really matter coz it's ur poem] u hav to write it in a way that it's not annoying to read... u shud work on the structure of ur poem..
ok that's about it.. good poem =]

I really liked the way this was written. It was really unique. Way different from what I'm used to. It's simple, but it hold emotions. I liked this poem a lot.

I liked this piece much better. The structure was really nice, and I liked the idea of what she seems like versus how she really feels inside. I liked the similes used.

I'm not sure if I like all of those words being questions. Maybe if they were just statements followed by a period or a comma it would look better.

My honest critique: 4/5

Yeah honestly not your best either.
Like i said flow was off, i just didn't
like the way the poem sounds when
i read it.
<3Tay
4/5

It's so true that we can look at somebody and by there appearance alone assume how they feel or whats going on in their lives. A lot of people hide behind smiles and we never really know what their all about unless we take the time to find out or care. Excellent job again 5/5 GG23